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i did a little re-draw of this older piece
just for fun ;w;
plus i love the colors and it was pretty fun to do ;;w;;

sobs do you see any improvement??
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Yeah you've improved!
The shapes of the facial features look much more realistic here,and the shoulders too. and even the pose seems to have a lot more emotion/movement to it than the other,which is cool because it looks more dynamic and less flat.
And I really like the background to this one better as well,the shapes although still pretty abstract look a little like clouds/paint blotches and I think that's pretty cool.
Oh and another thing I like about this one is the lines,although sketchy (which I actually prefer over finished lineart) are much more fluid feeling to me.

Aaaaah I'm sorry if this comment was weird or intrusive @ V @;; )/